Coup de grace

Location

98121
United States
47° 36' 54.8892" N, 122° 20' 59.082" W

I stepped on a slug today. It made me wonder how you were doing. Leching your way across town no doubt. Filling your pockets with our disappointment. Recycling nicknames, sex games, growing pains. It's just growing up. It's a part of life. Happens to the best of us. That's why I'm here, isn't it? To have betrayal explained with a Doctorate's degree. Teenage heartbreak, 20 milligrams of it. Your occupied passenger seat, with a gift from me underneath, gathering dust. While I'm here in a room with no windows.

Comments

Imani Sophia

I like how you started off with a random slug... interesting piece of writing

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