consumed

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94806
United States
37° 58' 33.2508" N, 122° 20' 41.1396" W

consumed

what have you wrought?
a smothering indistinctness of darkness as thoughts creep.
once we savored innocence,
virginal and childlike,
but your heart soured.
a dark vision of pain -
drops of blood follow bitterness, follow pain,
love bled dry.
in a haze of bitterness,
i still love you.

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