Confusion Within The Teenage Mind

This pain is deep
He feels like taking a leap
A leap off the mountain called life
Stressed with acceptance
Not realizing there is nothing better repentance
Yeah the pain is deep
Deep In side a place too remote to find
Out there by his self looking at the reflection of himself wanting to hurt himself herself whose self
Yeah The pain is deep inside
As he struggles to keep his thoughts inside
He worries about a thoughtless child who might choose to die because their pain is deep
And he wonders to himself, is my pain really real
Or is it a fragmentation of this societies zeal to make me feel like a worthless sheep
Confusion is all I reap

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ABIGAIL MCNEIL

Teenage drama

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