Commitment and Capsizing

Choices, certainty, commitment:

coincidentally being with “c”.

confusingly, the latter means to either

  1. Call on a new, better life 
  2. choose a calm, consistent life

Catch both types of people 

Change to the other.

Change- collapsing, colliding, compacting;

Cacooning into a new, yet same identity.

Commitment causes this change, or vise versa.

Committment causes one to capsize the boat while

Contrastingly allowing the other to meet the 

Calm sea with equal calmness.

Channeling one or both choices happens to everyone.

Can we make or break the glass ceiling? Or

Can we remain where we are comfortable?

Choose. Commit, or capsize.

Commit, capsize

Capsize, commit

It’s a cycle.

 

 

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