"Comfort Zones" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 8/6/2005

Location

United Kingdom

You Know I Need To Pick Bones ...
In These Damned ... "Comfort Zones" ... !!!

Do You Think Yours Will SAVE You ... ? ...
If You're ... ON YOUR OWN ... !!?!!

How Can This Place ?
.... " Save You " .... !?!?!
From NEW Al Capones' ... ?!?

Or ...

Save You From THOSE ...
Who DON'T Want To Atone ...
For Problems They've Made ...
Like Our Lack of ... "OZONE" ...

This AIN'T ... " Charlie Brown !?! "

..." Linus Leave Your Towel HOME ... !!! "

Folks ... What Will You Do ... ?
If Your Comfort Zone ... BLOWS ... !!!!!

... " UP IN YOUR FACE " ... !?!

Just Like Farmyard Hay ...
On A COLD Breezy Day ... !!!

Or ... Youthful Aggression ...
Ends Up In ... " Your Plate " ... !???!

Let's Keep It REAL ...
In Fact ... Let's Keep It TRUE ... !!!!!

Cos' TRUTH In The End ....
Will DEFINE What is ... " YOU " ... !?!

A ... " Comfort Zone FOOL " ... !!?!!
Or A WISE MAN Who's SCHOOLED ... !!!

Schooled In ... What's FACTUAL ...
And SCHOOLED In The TRUTH ... !!!!!

TRUTH As In ... NATURE ...
NOT Technological Tools ... !!!

Like Mobiles For Children ...
They're Being ... "MISUSED" ... !!!

These Words Aren't Just ...
....... "My Views" ...... !!!!!

These Words ARE ...
... THE TRUTH ... !!!!!!!!

Mobiles Are Now Used ...
By ... IGNORANT Youth ...
To Film ... VIOLENT Actions ... !?!

Just Check In The News ... !!!

Don't Get It Confused ... !!!!!
You CANNOT Trust Everything ...
In ... News Reviews ... !!!!!

But DON'T Overlook ...
These Types of Issues ... !!!!!

Can A Comfort Zone Save You ... ?!?
From ... Youthful Abuse ... ?

Ignore ..................................

If You ... Choose ... !?!
But DON'T Ever Say ...
You Weren't Given Clues ... !!!!!!

On How To ....... AVOID .......
A Case of ... " Muddy's Blues " ...

Water Is NATURAL ...
Rivers Run DEEP ...

But ...

This Is MY VIEW ... !!!

"COMFORT ZONES" ...
You Can ... KEEP ... !!!!!

They Are For The WEAK ... !!!
Who Think They Can't Weep ... ???!???

I've WEPT For My Mother ... !!!
Now She's ... SAFE In Sleep ... !!!

You SEE ...
My Mother Was Sick ...
For ... Most of My Youth ...
Which Is Why I'm So Able ...
To Deal With The TRUTH ....... !!!!!

SIXTEEN Odd Years ... !!!!!

I Feared Shedding Tears ...
But Now That I'm OLDER ...
I've Dealt With My Fears ... !!!

How Many of YOU ... ?????
Would Prefer Some ... New Shoes ...

Rather Than Have To DEAL With ...
The Things I've Been Through ... ?!?

SEEING Your Mother ...
DISTRESSED By ... Her Lover ... ?!?

Who RAN ... "undercover" ... !?!
Cos' He ... NEVER LOVED HER ... !!!!!

His ACT Was A BLUNDER ...
He CAN'T Now RECOVER ... !!!!!!!!

Cos' Anger I HOLD ...
Now Rumbles Like ...

... " THUNDER " ... !!!!!!

He's In His ... "COMFORT ZONE" ...
While Your Mobile Phone ROAMS ..............................................................

I Don't Have Comfort Zones ...
Or A ... Million Pound Home ... !!!!!

I'd Rather Be HAPPY ... !!!!!
And ... NOT Have To MOAN ....

About ... Tax For My Car ...
Or The CONGESTION CHARGE ... !!!!!

I'm Trying To MAKE IT ...
And SHINE Like A ... " STAR " ... !!!!!

Who DOESN'T Just Say ...
The SAME ... " BLAH DI BLAH BLAH " ... !!!!!

Did You Laugh ... ???
... " Ha Ha Ha " ... !!!!

But Life ISN'T FUNNY ... !!!!
Life's Moving TOO FAST ... !!!
TOO MANY Gun Blasts ... !!!!!

With ...

NO MORE ... " JOHN SHAFTS " ... !!!

TOO MANY EMPIRES .... !!!!!
With ... VADERS For HIRE ... !!!!!

TOO MANY MP'S ... !!!!
Who ... NEED TO RETIRE ... !!!!

Too Many of US ... !!!
With ... "Lustful Desires" ... !!!!

Can You ... FEEL MY FIRE ... !?!
It's Making Me TIRED ... !!!

I'm ... TIRED of TRYING ....
When So MANY KEEP LYING ... !!!!!!

LYING ... To THEMSELVES ... ???!???
About Their MENTAL HEALTH ... !!!
Because of THEIR WEALTH ... !!!?!!!

MONEY Is ... PAPER ... !!!
It's NOT A Life Saver ... !!!!

I'm The ... " BLACK " ...
.... " CAPED CRUSADER " .... !!!!!

So ....
Do Me A FAVOUR.... !!!

REMEMBER THESE WORDS .... !!!

God Is YOUR MAKER ...
But If You're NOT CAREFUL ... !!!

He May Be ... YOUR BREAKER ... !!!

Read IN BETWEEN Lines ...
STOP TAKING Coc' Lines ... !!!!!

Try Talking With A Coc' Head ... ?!?
They're ... OUT OF THEIR MINDS ... !!!!!

REPEATING Themselves ...
Pretty Much ... ALL THE TIME ... !!!!!

Now In These LAST LINES ...
Are Words For ... "The BLIND" ... !!!

OPEN Your Eyes ...
And Then You'll REALISE ...

You're NOT ALONE .... !?!
We ALL Have To LIVE HERE ...

Earth Is ... " OUR HOME " .... !!!!!

DON'T EVER Presume ...
You DESERVE What You Own ... !!!!!
And DON'T EVER THINK ... !!!!

You DESERVE Your Own THRONE ... !!!

Cos' Those Who Live Like THAT ...
Are DOGS ... WITHOUT Bones ... ?!?

And THESE ARE The FOOLS ...

Who Live In ...

.... "COMFORT ZONES" .... !!!!

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