A Comet across Night's Sky.

Like a comet that illuminates the night
I illuminate my darkness when I write.
Lacking much, I still have a plan-
so I do what I must and all that I can
through which, hidden riches I abundantly own-
they come rushing forth
in each new poem!

This poem is about: 
Me

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Annette M Velasquez

More of my very early poetry- from my teens. Note the simplicity, so very different from my current multi-dimensional writing.

gvall123

While nothing come the night ,the morn will spring a line in my mind and the verse takes shape,,

You have a poem come rushing to you,,,so it must be be for all of us I would like to think,,,

Annette M Velasquez

Thank you for your critique of my " comet" poem. As I mentioned, it is an older one. Yes, poetry does come as a comet, in a rush sometimes- and I do share it with everyone.

Spinjanebob

I can relate to this so much felt like u wrote it specifically for me.

Annette M Velasquez

I am glad that you can relate, this is just how I feel about writing! It is a catharsis, illuminating, and pierces the darkness...

Annette M Velasquez

I am glad that you can relate, this is just how I feel about writing! It is a catharsis, illuminating, and pierces the darkness...

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