'Come Correct' ... A Poem written by Big Virge 6/9/2017

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United Kingdom

Ya Know It's HARD To... " Come Correct "... !!!
WHEN Your Descent Is What Causes OFFENCE...
To These IGNORANT Heads... !?!
BIGOTED, YES As Well As ARROGANT... !!!
When It Comes To What's Said About Us... " IMMIGRANTS "... !!!
Aren't They Immigrants Then Or Maybe.... ALIENS.... ?!?
Cos' They DO NOT Come Correct When It Comes To Common Sense...
So YES It's HARD To Come Correct....
When RACIST Feds Or YES I Mean... Police... !!!!
Decide To Bring A Team To WRECK And Make Hearts Bleed... !!!
You See THIS Is Poetry That People DON'T EXPECT...
Because It Comes CORRECT When Broaching THESE Subjects... !!!
So Let's Move On To Other Wrongs That... DON'T BELONG.... !!!!!
Because They PROVE That MANY CHOOSE To Act Like FOOLS... !?!
Who When You CHECK Come... INCORRECT... !!!
BELIEVE OH YES There Are MANY OF THEM... !!!!!
..... Who NEED To Be In THIS Poem ..... !!!

Like Men I Mean... BOYS And Girls WHO ANNOY...
Because of Their Ploys And... Lack of Poise...
You See Coming Correct Is NOT About SEX.... !!!!!
Although I DO Suggest That You Get A GOOD Bed.... !!!!!
That DOESN'T Crack WHEN Her CRACK Gets WET...
Or You're Giving Head Cos' Some Girls Tend...
To FREAK When SPREAD...
For Dick With LENGTH That When FELT... SENDS...
Their Bodies Into ..... FRENZIES ..... !!!!!!
So If Your Girl Is HEAVY... ?!?
Come CORRECT Just Like I Said...
When It Comes To YOUR BED... !!!
Make SURE It Has STRENGTH... !!!!!
UNLIKE These Feds' And Government Heads...
Who Are CLEARLY Weak You See Words They Speak...
It's CLEAR To Me Do NOT Benefit Humanity... !!!
They Benefit GREED And CORRUPTED Deeds... !!!
And Those I Believe Are What THEY Call POLICIES... !?!
You See I COME CORRECT Within My Poetry... !!!!!!
Because I'm NOT AFRAID of.... " Dictionaries ".... !!!!!
Like Chris Rock Said It SADLY Seems....
That A LOT of Black Peeps’ Just... DO NOT Read.... !?!?!
Apart From FALLACIES On... Internet Feeds... !!!!!
So It's Safe To Say That Books ARE The Place... !!!
To Hide Your Money If You Wanna Keep It... “SAFE“...
From Blacks Who TEEF'... Did You Find That FUNNY... ?!?
Cos' It’s Just A JOKE... !!!!!
But COME CORRECT DON'T Be That Bloke...
Who CAN'T Cover Your Debts Because You're BROKE... !!!
Because What You CHOSE Was To Check For DOPE... !!!
Instead of Quotes That You SHOULD KNOW... !!!
Quotes That SHOW How The Story Goes...
DISRESPECT For Black People...
From Those Who've CHOKED Our Ability To GROW... !!!!!!
Into MORE THAN Ropes That Hung Our Bones... Because They Were EVIL... !!!!!!
So On That Note It's Time To GO.... !!!
Cos' I've COME CORRECT With These Words That Flow...
That CLEARLY SHOW How Scenarios Roll...
That NEED To Be CHECKED... !!!!!
So It's Time To END This Simple Poem...
That Merely Suggests That When It Comes To Your Moves....
And How You USE Your Head... Folks Try Your BEST...

To YES.....

.............. " Come CORRECT " .......... !!!!!

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