College girl

Why is this so hard 

Was raised like an uptowngirl 

Now a poor college girl

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MelissaScarlett

11 years ago

Give me some feedback, please!!! <3 I am trying to win the scholarship! Thank you !

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

11 years ago

like the beginning

add more verses to this poem in making it captivating

this is an interesting concept

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