Chocolate dream is a nightmare

I was walking in a jungle and 

and i found a chocolate town,

the people living there give me chocolate town.

When I was walking in the town,

I found a river,

where chocolate rocks were drowned

I was eating chocolate in zero gravity

in my teeth i got cavity

I got cavity its not fair

i wake up from my bed oh what a nightmare

                                                            -Orion

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