Chapter one (Cinquain)

Location

07524
United States
40° 55' 48.1836" N, 74° 9' 22.6512" W

Mature
Unfurl new wings,
Anxious to taste freedom,
Yet afraid to take the first leap,
Adult

Comments

samueltfranklin

Yep, that's pretty much a good summation of growing up; being eager to take on the future, but simultaneously fearing the hell out of it. A universal feeling boiled down to a few succinct lines--well done.

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