Fri, 03/16/2018 - 15:56 -- Neftee

Break the bonds of doubt
You are a slave to you,
Change you
To change your world,
If you don't change your approach
The outcome will not change.
Break the bonds of fear
You are chained to you
Change your mind
To change the problems
The solutions will
Be found.
Break the bonds of comfort
You are an inmate to habit.
Change your patterns
to change the situation.
You will rise above yourself.
We all have the potential
To be legends.



I really enjoyed your poem really speaks deep to me, repeating change

and rising up to become legends just really reached out at my soul love it keep up the good work 

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