broken promises, you made to me

Thu, 03/23/2017 - 19:33 -- EllieOh

"I'll be there in 5"

     you were still in bed, weren't you?

 

"I'll buy this time"

      I didn't mind paying, just like you              

      didn't mind forgetting your wallet at home

 

"your gift is on its way!" 

     you forgot, didn't you?

 

"Its probably nothing, don't worry"

    didn't feel like nothing

 

"you'll be okay"

       what if I wasn't?

 

"The meds will help"

       I just felt worse

 

"i won't leave" 

     you will 

 

 

"I'll love you forever" 

 

         you didn't.

 

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