Broken loved

Wed, 03/03/2021 - 14:47 -- sherwod

I love you oh broken one

I love you broken

I love you collapsed

I love you sick

I love you angry

I love you vengeful

I love you no matter 

I love you lying

I love you cheating

I love you skipping

I love you not caring

I love you sassing

I love you stealing

I love you swearing

I love you ridiculing

I love you sulking

I love you forever, 

No matter what, 

I love you, because, 

He loves me. 

This poem is about: 
My family

Comments

Ubong

The usage of I Love You as the hook was a magnificent pull

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