A Broken Heart Made Me Stronger

                                                       Her smile keeps me close,

                                                  her tender hugs bring me closer,

                                                     her kisses hold me hostage,

                                she's forever in my mind even when I think I lost it,

                                   how do I tell her how I feel if I'm always scared to try,

                              seeing right through me gazing deep into my eyes,

              she see's a very bright future for a handsome man with nice feautures,

                                   my ambitions at this age labels me as a keeper,

                                              Its not hard to love someone like her,

                                  she makes me smile at the slightest touch of ease,

      but i'm begging please if this heart breaks please don't let it bring me to my knees,

      ...its to late..the hurt is here laying on my all black cover, black pillow, black sheets,

                  light shining through my blinds gives the darkness orange streaks, 

                           as the soreness from track practice take its toll on body,

                               I see torn reflections of her laying right beside me,

                             I thought that I'd found the one, my homie-lover-friend,

                             I guess the other dude gave you what I didnt in the end.

                                                          I'm heart broken....

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