Broken

"You're broken," she stated like he already didn't know.

"Damaged goods," the boy agreed lightly.

She licked her lips and stared.

He blinked and waited.

"I'll fix that." 

Comments

iluvwritingxoxo

9 years ago

isn't this from holes?

Justinejk

9 years ago

I haven't watched the movie in a while and I was confused for a couple of seconds but yeah I understand what you mean. When I wrote it I wasn't even thinking about that. I was thinking about myself really, which sounds selfish but is true. Thank for pointing that out though.

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