BRILLIANT EVENING

BRILLIANT EVENING

It was a brilliant eve... The day I first saw you. You were so ripped like a sprouting out sun on a new early day. You were beautiful then and now and each moment of life. Star fall in your lovely eyes like diamond sparkles light in the dead dark night I see your angelic eyes. Wherein beauty lies.
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This poem is about: 
Me
My family
My community
My country
Our world

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Amelia ๐Ÿ“š

I am love my group is Pandas and i am Amelia Tia and i am 23 years old yeah you bet i am i am in love with your poam nice

Amelia ๐Ÿ“š

โค๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™

Cloudnine Fairmane c9fm

Thanks Amelia, blessed art thou. Stay tuned for more...

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