United States
40° 16' 59.9052" N, 84° 8' 36.6504" W

As I walk, I see the bridge.
I smell the musty white rails.
I hear the heartbreaking whistle of the train.
I feel the embrace of her through the wind.
I taste the tears as they roll down my cheeks.
And I can think of is she can't be really gone.

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This is great! I can envision this scene. You have excellent phrasing and wordplay that bring this poem to life! 

I really enjoy reading your poems and I hope you will be writing more!!


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