"Boundaries Pt. II" ... A Poem written Big Virge 17/7/2013

Location

United Kingdom

I Used To Play … " Cricket "

So I Know About Boundaries Grounds And Wickets … !!!

Don't Catch The Ball Beyond Boundary Lines … !!!
Cos' It'll Be Your Downfall If You Step Outside …

Lines Designed That CLEARLY DEFINE …
Where You Should Reside To Keep Things Nice ...
And Not Collide With Laws That Ride …

OUTSIDE ……................ " Positive Vibes " … ?!?

Cos' Personal Boundaries Are A DIFFERENT Thing ... !!!
If You Don't Act Soundly ... Things Eventually STING … !!!!!!!!!!!!

So Here's My …. " Thesis " ….
Kindness for Weakness Seems To Be ....
Where Generosity Can Fuel ... PURE Animosity ... !!!?!!!

See Generous Heads Have The Right To Get VEX … !!!!!
When Generous Traits Are Abused In Ways …
That Others Would Say Are ... " Cool and Okay " … !?!

Like Playing The Game ... of Joking Away … !!!
About Things Being GIVEN As If It Is …. " A GIVEN " …. ?!?

That Things Being Shared Will ALWAYS Be There … ?!?
Because of Generosity With Things That Are Quite Costly ... !!!!!

Food And Drink And Other Things …
That No-One Gets For … FREE … !!!!!!!!!

Unless You Are A LEECH ….
Who RARELY Plants A Seed … !!!!!
On Which People Can Feed …

UNLESS They're From Your Breed … !!!

By This I Mean The Breed Who Bleeds …
Your Own Blood Type Cos' They're YOUR CHILD … !!!

Meantime You Drop These … " Subtle Lines " …
And Play ALL NICE Around The Guys Who'll Share Their Crop of Food That STOPS.

The Darkness That Resides In Those Whose Minds …
Like To Take Bites Like …. " Human Parasites " …. !?!

Who Wonder Why You DON'T Reply To Lines That Give … " SIGNS " …

That Boundaries Need To ... CLEARLY BE ….
REFINED DEFINED And Then OUTLINED To END Designs of DELUDED Types ...

From Dealing In Crimes That CROSS BOUNDARY Lines … !!!!!

See I Try To Restrict How I …. Enlist .…
Boundary Ropes That Just Say … "NO" … !!!!!

Because You NEVER KNOW … !!!?!!!
When Your Cash Flow May Leave You BROKE … !!!!!

Remember THAT QUOTE Cos' That's NO JOKE … !!!!!

And CAN'T Be Cool … !!!
But Only A Fool Would Give You PROOF …
of How They ABUSE Your GENEROUS Moves … !?!

Like TRYING To Use Jokes As A Way To … " INVOKE " …

What You Give For Free ...
Like It's YOUR DUTY To FEED THEIR NEEDS ... ?!?

I'm NOT YOUR Ho' ... NOPE DON'T Think So … !!!

THAT I Know ... BELIEVE It Yo … !!!!!

I Ain't Mad At You In Fact We Cool And That's The TRUTH … !!!!!!!

Cos' Now My Share Is YES …." ALL MINE " …. !!!!!

I No Longer Care ...
About How Your Life Has Been A TOUGH Ride … !!!

Mines' Been TOUGH TOO DON'T Get it Confused … ?!!!?
I've EARNED What I've Got WITHOUT Borrowing From …

My Friends Or Bods I BARELY Know ... !!!

BELIEVE It Bro Cos' That's A Boundary I've Yet To Cross …

NOT Accepting My Lot Cos' That To Me Seems Cowardly ... !!!!!

By This I Mean It Seems UNCLEAN …
To Take From Another WITHOUT ... Giving Back Brother …. ?!?

Be Grateful And Humble When Others GIVE To You …

Otherwise You May Just Stumble … !!!
When You Start To ASSUME ...

That You Can Make Assertions ……..
Or WORSE Still Make … " DEMANDS " … ?!!!?

That Prove Your Words Are Surplus …
To Just Having ….. " A Laugh " ….. !!!

But Cool Man … " Ha Ha Ha " ... !!!
You've Marked Your Card And Crossed The Line … !!!

Where What Was Fine Has Now Been MARRED ... !!!
You DROPPED The Ball Whilst I've Now … " Caught " ...
Where Some of Your Thoughts Seem To …. " RESIDE " ….

I Guess Like Brownies ... " Overcooked " ….
Here's Something You …. " Overlooked " ….

You Really Should Act Soundly …
When Running Talk That When Absorbed …

May Well Cross Peoples' …..

.... " Boundaries " …. !!!!!

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