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34° 1' 38.8632" N, 117° 55' 50.7288" W

My dreams are as far and distant as they could be
Im blind I don’t know where my life will lead
So many choices so many things to choose from
All this weight in my shoulders is too heavy to lift
My conscience tells me to give it all up
But my heart is making me strive higher and higher
As these pitiful thoughts tell me I cant do it
Sometimes they just hypnotize me
Into thinking that its not even worth it
Time is precious , and theres no turning back
If you keep your mind set than maybe you’ll soar
Into the eagle that you once dreamt to become
And suddenly my dreams are clearing up
All I had to do was put in some focus
You can achive what you wish for DON’T GIVE UP !

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