Blank World Going Black



You can go BLANK on the brink just like I did

You might go cursing and spitting to your life's end

I went out like a light bulb

So far that I could'nt even feel cold

No emotion, no feeling and my own skin wasn't the real thing

You'd call it apathy or lazy

But I know what it feels like and it was not THAT

And anytime I got close to feeling again

Panic rose to choke me in the blue like SIN

In the depths of the night I could only pray to be alright

My GOD where did my skin go?

Do YOU know?

In those moments, His name was not a curse

It was a VERSE

By miracle, those people I'd been reaching for were reaching BACK

And they stopped my BLANK world from going BLACK



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