Black is the Spirit of The Soul

Sun, 10/12/2014 - 20:50 -- namjad

There has always been something special about October

About Halloween

About the Addams Family

and their sadistic values

There's something about the moon at night

something about twigs and branches accenting a company of clouds

 

How calming Autumn is with its merry wanderers of the night

The Dark Bards of mystical verse 

And Sirens singing to sinful sights

Go Medusa, preach

and let the Kingdom come

 

We shall scrawl the walls with art

dried out markers, stolen chalk

and write something philisophical in the urinal

about life and death and thought

 

Comments

piinklapin

I really like this poem and its contents! I just posted my first slam poem and I was wondering if you could look at it and provide some constructive criticism?

TORY WHITE

i LOOVE THIS POEM AND I WAS WONDERING IF YOU READ MY NENW POEM "FREEDOM IN A CAGE" AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK

tylerjusfly

not bad sister but can u please check out my poem and please tell me what u think.. thanks

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