Beyond the limit,

Location

817 Water Elm Court
United States
36° 44' 31.8768" N, 76° 16' 7.068" W

 

 

I must go,

I’ve been down this road before.

A state of mind,

Stopped,

By the world.

 

The burning sensation that courses throughout my body,

Of muscle and bone,

For every step I take,

Fills my mind,

With regret and doubt.

Doubt,

I might have the capability to finish.

Stop,

Voices echo,

Give up,

Voices cry.

Quit!

No !

My soul,

Will reply.

 

Because, all that sacrifice,

The effort

The pain.

All for nothing.

 

So I’ll dig deep,

Into the mantle,

Pass,

The molten core.

Where my soul will continue.

 

Continue this endeavor.

Carrying the body,

Hindering no longer.

To a place,

Its never been before.

Leaving behind,

The regret and doubt,

Pushing the world back.

Going,

Beyond the limit.

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Comments

janelove003

I love this poem. It's so well put together. Love your style!

IIISLYIII

Thank you I really appreciate your comment.

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