The Best of Me

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I look down and notice that I am falling

I look up and see that I am too far down

I over look all of my surroundings

And fail to notice the walls closing around

 

To others the sun is light

To me it is burning inferno

Wake up admiring a new sight

I awake dreaming for a furlo

 

Dreams are hopes for those without lives

With lives they are living reality

To get to that point minds collide

But fail through self infidelity

 


Doors that welcome anyone

Welcome great disasters

Laughs and good times right now

Later spells and casters

 

How could I have been so blind

To believe the untrue was so true

Thinking I could open my eyes

And see past and through

 

Comments

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upnorthdavid

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