The Beginning

In the begining there wasnt a single living saol-

exsept God

God wanted light 

God wanted the "hevans"

Oh, God wanted the earth and sea,

So he made it.

With no dout it was good and butyfull

 

Oh, God you made the sun and the moon?

For What?- you ask.

"For the light and glory" he answers.

"Let the sea's be filled with living cretures" - and "let the birds fly to the sky!"

"Let the land bring fourth living creatures of every kind"- Let me create man and woman equaly

"I will name you adom and eve."

"But, let thee be warned for I have made a tree of good and evil"

"Tell every child that this tree is forbidin to all"- "for you may eat from every tree but thee"

But wondering leaded to trouble-

For eve has eaten the forbidin fruit

and shared with adom

will they find the knowlege that they are naked?

"For God then says how do you know you were naked?!"

"For I assume that you have eaten from the tree of good and evil!"

"Do not blame evil for its actions"

"You will leave this garden and never come back "

"You will have to work hard to suvive outsife because you have diobeyed me."

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