Beautiful? Maybe

Location

Beautiful? Maybe

 

Always thinking of the right words to say

It would have been clearer if I said it my way

Every move is in need of some thought

Always unsure if they get it or not…

I hear the echoes of a sound so far away

I just don’t understand a single word they say

I move closer so that I can hear,

But when I do the words disappear…

I see the traces of a picture I have dreamed

But when I looked it wasn’t what it seemed

Cause every time I let it go

I’m left with nothing but an empty show

I looked searched and searched and there at

last  I found..

A wondrous place with beautiful sound

There I have found the truth that set me free

It wasn’t far; it’s as plain as can be

All so amazing, it’s just inside of me.

 

 

 

 

Comments

tawnibird10

I really value self pride and self trust and i tried to enphasis that in my poem. What you see as yourself shouldnt matter to others therefore be yourself.

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