Beacuse I could not stop for Disappointment

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Because I could not stop for Disappointment

He  stop for me

He came knocking on my door

And hit me hard on the face

As soon as I opened the door

 

I saw him taking me away

But I was too weak to fight

So I lie down helplessly

And call for help but it never came

So  I tried to give up

but He started to

 

Laugh at me ,it made me strong

And never to give up.

I tried calling for hope but it failed me

So I started crying out loud and saying

My hope

my hope

why have you failed me

 

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