Bang!

Sat, 07/13/2013 - 11:07 -- laffon

Location

1917 S Grimball Rd
United States
32° 42' 1.5048" N, 79° 58' 29.6796" W

Bang!

it feels like a thousand holes

all through the skin

it makes me feel so thin

in my arm head n espeacialy in my chest

im never at rest

the memories serve as the gun

and my actions as my finger

and the words are the bullets released by the trigger

me shooting myself thats scary picture

but it all thoughts when im not with her

every memory like a shot in the air

every touch on my fingers is a memory of her hair

every flash i see her there

and everyday i wish i could redoo it all to show her how much i care

our love was bright like a flare

and is now almost gone in darkness as we dare

to test our pain

its all love and games

like it started it ends in a Bang!

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