Arms

the safest place 

is in his arms

away from the world

away from myself

for once I can breathe

a full breath of air

but when he leaves 

I suffocate

 

Comments

Zanies

2 years ago

This is so cute! I've been reading your poems for the last year and I usually don't comment but I couldn't help loving the simple, yet powerful meaning. I'm working on a peice about being in my lover's arms currently too!

LillianMills

2 years ago

Aw omg that's so crazy. Thank you so much <3

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