Another Girl

Sat, 04/27/2013 - 19:21 -- stokesn

Location

92020
United States
32° 47' 46.7592" N, 116° 58' 3.2916" W

She was hypnotized by words, taken away by temptation
She was one small person in this nation
Her thoughts keep her awake at night, the demons take her for a spin
Her darkest fantasies were her sin
Who was she? No one knew
Her smile was shining like rain dew
She never said a word about the pain that haunts
Or about the other people she calls "friends" who taunt
Mysterious she is, mysterious she shall always be
Her eyes could not see
She ran from freedom, seduced by lies
Her happiness always dies
Maybe she is the angel that has fallen upon this world
Or maybe she is no one special, just another girl

Comments

braidlocs

I love your poem...        It could've been me, another girl

 

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741