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Angels made of charcoal outlines (For the little girl who was told she was too dark to be human)

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91737
United States
34° 10' 43.5288" N, 117° 35' 5.2908" W

There was a time in this country it was a sin to be black,
when limp bodies dangled like bloated, forbidden fruit
and ‘coon’ was considered a pet name.

Darling of mine, don’t let them scare you
they are afraid of the rumble in your bones,
the universe of brilliance spinning at the tips of your fingers.
When they say things like,
“You’re beautiful…for a black girl”
you see, they are not just colorblind
ignorant that it is your skin cradling their white stars in the sky,
when they try to say you are just a slave’s bastard child
you tell them, no get it right,
my ancestors carried your nation’s root on our backs
with hands rich with soil from the promise land.
Your skin descended from the survival of rape and scorched earth
from all that charred and burnt flesh
we grew flowers and the world anew.
You tell them:
you are no one’s cattle
you are the one who survived

We are the ones who survived and carried on.

Comments

SophieSmasher

this is beautiful!

Mafi Grey

Amazing 

jujumurray

this is so amazing and powerful!

Stephanie D.

You are brilliant. This poem is inspiring.

braidlocs

that's a very powerful message that should be told...    I enjoyed your poem please keep writing

blurredROSESSS

Very well written!!!

dalia.m.mckenzie

That was beautiful.  I didn't even realize I needed to hear (read) that.  Thank you.

Hippolyta

Very well written! Good job.

Never Royal

This poem is amazing and truly stays with you. great job :)

btesh

This is beautiful, really.

Martini94

Very beautiful and  powerful imagery

Karis Elle

This is beautiful. Your use of words and images is amazing and inspiring.

How.About.No.

This poem was powerful and uplifing and i can't wait to read more from this poet!

GGicefire

I know we have a history

Of being torturers.

But not every one.

I can't hold anything against you

Knowing that you have a million times

As many truths within you

As I have ever had

Because you have reason to find them.

My appearance makes me a respected torturer.

I wish otherwise.

I wish no appearance could change a girl's soul in others' eyes.

I wish that everyone knew as much as you do, as I might someday.

 

Many people say things, horrible cruel things,

Just because they can.

To convince themselves that they are superior.

Snatch those miserable untruths from their lips.

You have skill. I wish you luck.

Go, righteous stranger.

Go, and prove them wrong.

ScorpioD91

Your poem is phenomenal! The title is enticing, the words are beautiful, and the poem is dauntless.

JanusX92

Absolutely beautiful. Great job, and definitely a wonderful delivery.

K. Noelle

Why can't I favorite these things.. Is there a way to favorite these things? I'm going to find a way to favorite these things. 

marysitz

We are working on it on our end! (I totally agree)

 

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funinthesun17

This is beautiful!! It is so inspriring and mind opening.  

gamino.r

Wow!!!

 Snaps to you that was very powerful

Yes, I really liked this

samiamehbub17

This is wonderful. You are the one who fought this world for peace. You are the action.

ken5zee

This is absolutely amazing. 

sierrasunrose

you packed so much emotion into a one minute poem - this is incredible, and so moving and powerful. congrats on the win, you absolutely deserved it. 

jacob morris

great poem! and yes it is very inspiring, i read this as if reading a story this is great keep it up!

butterflyblackwings

This is such an exceptionally well-written and powerful poem.

ChaotiCleverity

This is truly beautiful.. *applauds*

KINGDOMBUILDER

#Snaps&#claps#Yesss!!..#Awesome#sauce lol

asyri20

love it , this really spoke to me and gave me confidence

 

clari.nellie

This title is absolutely brilliant!!!!!

kaitlynmcnab

*snaps for YEARS* this was outstanding. Outstanding.

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