and they color them blue
Location
the words i use flow through my veins
and the vowels i pronounce are my red and whites
i would like to say straight up fuck you
get that off my chest
let's talk about the rest
i write about my latinas
and i love me some big breasts
and thighs juicier than orange juice
i write about the world
i write about the neighborhood
and i despise it when women
talk about a man's length and girth
i write about peace
i write about war
i write about corruption
i write lewinsky
getting on her fours
i write about bush
i write about dick chaney
i write about the lies and misleads
i write about terror
i write about osama bin laden
i write about 9/11
i write about so called million virgins
waiting for them in a place call heaven
i write just about politics
i write about wigs spit so hard
turn the tree on your limbs
into leave and twigs
i write because i can
i write because i am
and like the great one would say
just bring it
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Reinanena
Honest and deep...
Reinanena
I have and I'm amazed at how many you have written...read a lot of them so far...nicee
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
very humbled that u like my poems
check out my other poems i've written
inthemorningoftheday
My chicks are like whips they stay European foreign
Know I ride them often and both of em cost a fortune
Nikkas acting like they fast I'm acting like I'm not strapped
Nikkas tell me "don't get slapped" I tell nikkas "don't get clapped"
With the auto,also,of them I got cuatro
That's 4 to milk your cream like I'm serving out some gelato
I'm done doing my time it's moment for recognition
Tryna make the game and it's my turn to get admission
I'm watching hoes on my plasma rolling this marijuana
Pouring down some coke on top of this damn buccanah's
These other runners like me tryna walk up like they dope
Im like nope,you wrote and choke mf you just ain't cold
I got a gram of that ghost sealed tight in this envelope
And if just make it glow i'll unload the quotes that i owe
that will put yours on hold and destroy all your hope
have your poems crack up like im handing out jokes
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
this poem flows like a verse in a rap song
it has a bitter, but yet funny melody
are you an artist?
keep writing
i will encourage you my brother to challenge your vocabulary, expand your thoughts and, write out the box
what makes poets greater is the continuation of captivating the audience of all
jmedwards8
Hi velezjrrobert,
Thank you for sharing this. I admire your conviction and your confidence in this piece, and I always appreciate honesty in a poem, so thanks for all of that.
I also really love the pacing and the sound here and would love to hear some recordings of your work. Power Poetry encourages multi-media formats for your work, and if I were you, I'd use that!
As you think about further writing and/or revision of this poem, I'd like to challenge you to unpack a lot of the things you touched on here. I'm so glad you have so much about which to write, but I was left wanting more here! Let's see some of that, and make sure to use clear, colorful images as you write.
Thanks again!
J
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
hey j
i live to write, i love to write
i love to move the crowd and leave them at awe amazed to see what i write about next
i write about many topics-i'm a regular performer-i perform at various locations in nyc
alot of my writings project many images-my goal is to touch lives
the multi-media format is not a bad idea-i want to read more about it and continue to be creative
thank you for embracing my honesty and conviction
check out my other poems and provide feedback, along with support
velezjrrobert aka mvp-most valuable poet