America's Critique

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                   America,

                people think
            it's so big and strong.
                but honestly,
                I think they're 
                     wrong.
 
                Greed and lies
                  nobody hears
            the middle classes
                        cries.
               We want our lives
                not a government
                    that deprives.
 
                   The way I see 
                    we should be
                         free.
                      I live in this 
                        country.
                    I see firsthand,
                 how the government
                    has everything
                        planned.
 
                I decided to take a 
                           stand
                            and
                        reprimand.
 
                    The only way
                   we can improve,
                    is to point out
                       the things we
                         disapprove.
                  
                  -Nicole Kosakowski

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