am i still sane?

Thu, 09/26/2013 - 15:06 -- xione7

she loves me

she needs me

i love her with all my heart

she is my love

she is my dove

and nothing can keep us apart

i need her

i love her

when i'm away it is a bane

she's like a drug

a drug is her hug

i think i'm going insane

i scream and hiss

her kiss is bliss

the need hits like a car

yet even still

it is my will

his arrow left on my heart a scar

i'm filled with glee 

her love stings like a bee

 it's soft as a dove

my heart filled with love

and i think i'm going insane

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