Always Keep Trying

Mon, 07/28/2014 - 14:01 -- Nesh67

Location

Bakersfield
United States

Slamming the enemy.
What makes me tick,
In a land with so many options,
I come out swinging.
Bills are suffocating,
School is drowning,
But life is worth living.
And that's why I'm trying,
At a speak my mind slamming,
With hopes held high, up to the sky.

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