All around me outside


United States
26° 5' 57.5016" N, 97° 37' 59.2068" W

As we walk out, we chase away the clouds.
Shine on me today,
Fill my eyes and brighten my day.

In a moment anything could change.
Can you hear it?
Can you feel it?
The wind on your shoulders,
Driving your hair insane.

Underneath your feet, can you feel it?
Can you smell it?
The damp dirt,
The smell of fresh grass.

Gnats all around,
A fly went up my nose.
The clouds have returned,
Inside we go.


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