Acid Rain

All of my poems are about you 

I am not allowed to cry anymore 

I have cried too much already 

So now the sky is crying for me

the weather is cold. 

I used to get a bit sad when it would rain, 

and you asked me why. 

You said rain washes away all the bad 

You said rain was beautiful 

because it gives everyone a fresh start. 

Now you're gone 

I still tried to embrace it 

but it's been hours and I am not new 

my hands are wrinkly and frozen 

even the rain sided with you, 

I have nothing left 

This poem is about: 
My community



I really love how you detail your writing i wanna read more it leaves you on edge its amazing


Thank you! I'll try to out more stuff out 

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