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Wed, 12/17/2014 - 20:51 -- DC129

The screen fades to baby blue,

My heart expands to a beach ball. 

I did this.

Me.

My fault,

I worked so hard.

Brain power. 

Persistence.

Second guessing.

My fault,

I worked so hard.

Me. 

I did this.

I got in. 

My brain floats to Nirvana,

The screen gleams with navy ribbons. 

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