Abnormal Businessman

There is an abnormal businessman

Who is a corporate partisan.

He taints all oceans with oil,

Which contaminates the soil.

Afterwards, he is a garbageman.

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S.zaynab.k

Wow creatively super poem that talks of the polluting business man. Enjoyed the way u said it. Thumbs up.

 

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