1st poem

Sun, 05/26/2013 - 05:43 -- pri


United States
38° 42' 53.6652" N, 121° 21' 35.5716" W

When you feel that feelin
Of something happenin
Your heart starts beatin
And you dunno why beats r skippin
you look a little deeper
and see your passions glowing stronger
somehow the old you is now in the mirror
and the new you is turnin your back lookin to the future


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