13 Reasons Why I Fell in Love with You: Part Six

Number Six
You know I liked brown sugar on my popcorn 
and that I hated popcorn plain or buttered, 
and could only enjoy it sweet, 
so when I asked you to please refill the popcorn 
and make sure to add brown sugar, 
in the midst of The Faults in Our Stars, 
because I could bear to leave Augustus and Hazel, 
you leaned close, with your lips to my ears, 
and murmured, 
"If you go out with me, it'll be sweeter 
than all the brown sugar in the world combined." 


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