“Taking Notes“ ... (EXPLICIT Lyrics !!!) A Poem written by Big Virge 27/2/2014

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United Kingdom

Ya’ Know My Poetry Shows …
That I’m … “ Taking Notes “ …
Yes … “ Mental Notes “ … !!!

Notes of Quotes …
Quotes From Those Whose Rhetoric Shows …

That Quotes They Make Expose Mind States …
That Are LOST In Ways I CAN’T Explain … !!?!!

Most LACK Brainwaves That’ll Keep Them Safe … !!!
Because They DISPLAY IGNORANCE And PAIN … !!!!!
That CLEARLY RUNS … Inside Their Veins … !!!!!
So Many Behave Like They’ve Gone INSANE … !!!!!

They Claim And They CLAIM That They … “ Have Got Game “ … !!!!!!!!
But FAIL To See That Ignorance Can Lead To PAINFUL SCENES … !!!!!

Scenes OBSCENE Because They Lean Unevenly ... !! !!! !!
When CERTAIN Speech Is Heard By Teams …
Whose Dreams Concede To … “ HURTFUL DEEDS “ … !!!!!!!!!!

Because of Words They THINK … "Aren’t Heard" … !!!

By Headz Who Note The Quotes of Those ...
Whose Throats Make Quotes …
That They SHOULD KNOW Could See Them CHOKED … !!!!!

I’ve Noted Now That Quotes Bring FROWNS …
When Threatening Sounds Are Passed Around ….
That Have NO GROUNDS To Leave Their Mouths … !!!!!!!!!!

Those I Note To Be INSECURE Souls … !!!!!
Who Swim In Shoals of Fish In Zones Where BIG FISH Roam … !!!!!!
And Make Their Sight Ensure That Their Fight Is For THEIR LIFE …. !!!!!!!!
It is NOT WISE To Rock The Boat When Things You Quote DEFINE PURE LIES … !?!

Or WORSE DENIAL Because The Trials Denial Profiles ...
Are Those That Dial Those of … GREEN MILES … !!!!!

I Note That Styles These Days Are WILD … !!!
All These Adult Child Run Talk That’s VILE … !!!!!

Threats of STRESS And VIOLENCE …. !!?!!
Because of Things Like Old White Tricks … !!!
Whose Notes Enlist Sourcing Black Dicks … !!!!

I’ve Noted THIS Leads To Lyrics From Blacks Transfixed By Pussy Lips ... !!!
In FACT CONTROLLED Because It’s CLEAR They’re PUSSYHOLES’ … !!!!!

Who Seem To Adhere To Begging These Ho’s … ?!?
For EVERYTHING FROM Their Head To Their Toes … !!!!!

I’ve NOTED Their Moves … !!!

... “Sweetheart, I Love You, Sweetheart, I Love You !
... You know I would do, anything to have you !”

These Things I Have … “ Noted “ … !!!
Help Them To Get Truuuu’ … !!!

But Love For Their Brother Becomes More Like THUNDER … !!!
Because of A HOLE ... That’s Just How It Goes …

I’m NOTING That Laughter And Being Much Smarter … !!!
Works Better For Me Than Getting ANGRY … !!!

But I’ve Also Noted That Things Some Be Quoting …
Indulge In Advice That May Not Be … WISE … !!!

Dismissal of Talk From Ignorant Sorts …
Who KEEP MAKING Threats To Mess With Mans’ Head … ?!?
Would They Do The Same If Man Called THEIR NAME … !!!

And Then Made The CLAIM That They’d … “Come to their place !” …

I’ve Noted That People Are FEARFUL of Evil … !!!
And Say ... "Don't confront these punks pulling stunts !" …

That STUNT … Being HUMAN … ?!?!?

Like ACCEPTING The Truth And Just Being Cool ... !!!!!!!!!
NOT Being UNCOUTH And Acting The Fool … !!!
When They Should Be ..... " COOLING “ …..

My Notes KEEP ME Schooled So DON'T You Be Fooled … !!!!!
I’ve Noted That Humans ... Make IGNORANT Movements … !!!!!

So Now In Conclusion I’m NOT About War And That Is The Score … !!!!!
But Will NOT Put Up With YOU FRAUDS ANYMORE … !!!!!
CUT OUT The Whispers And Acting Like FLIPPER … !!!!!!!!!!
CUT OUT THE BOASTS And THREATENING QUOTES … !!!!!!

Cos’ It’s NOT WISE To Roll As If Man Don’t Know …
What It Is To Be Cool And Study Your Moves …

How I Roll’s … “Undisclosed” …
But My Vibe Is Controlled …

So Just Watch How YOU GO …
Cos’ I’m Here …..

… “ Taking Notes “ … !!!

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Comments

bruce young

Yeah, yeah
Ayo, devil, it's time.
It's time, devil (aight, devil, begin).
Straight out the dark dungeons of rap.

The life drops deep as does my maze.
I never rapping, 'cause to rapping is the love of phrase.
Beyond the walls of killing, life is defined.
I think of hell when I'm in a Ptuj state of mind.

Hope the raise got some phrase.
My phase don't like no dirty blaze.
Run up to the malaise and get the praise.

In a Ptuj state of mind.
What more could you ask for? The black life?
You complain about black hole.
I gotta love it though - somebody still speaks for the alewife.

I'm rappin' to the weed,
And I'm gonna move your speed.

Planet, stupid, love, like a sad
Boy, I tell you, I thought you were a cad.

I can't take the black hole, can't take the smoking.
I woulda tried to dying I guess I got no choking.

I'm rappin' to the speed,
And I'm gonna move your weed.

Yea, yaz, in a Ptuj state of mind.

When I was young my love had an alewife.
I waz kicked out without no knife.
I never thought I'd see that fife.
Ain't a soul alive that could take my love's wife.

A die blood is quite the crud.

Thinking of hell. Yaz, thinking of hell (hell).

who likes ma rap

bruce young

nice poem bru

Big Virge

Cheers Bru !

Virge !

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