Ocean Girl

Lovely ocean girl

Your tears are falling

forming oceans and lakes

on the gound

 

You're wild, like storm tossed waves,

beautiful (the way oceans always are)

but most of all

You're sad.

 

You're so sad, so lovely.

Your sadness seeps out of you

like mist from mountains

(hovering around you like clouds)

 

Beautiful ocean girl

return to the sea

lose your sadness in the waves

become a force of nature.

 

Goodbye my lovely ocean girl.

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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