Asphyxiation

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49783
United States
46° 25' 52.716" N, 84° 16' 51.8484" W

The waves crash down on me,
Pushing me down.
My lungs burn for air.
Please put out the fire!
If I surrender,
I can be free.
Down to the darkness,
The black unknown.
The currents make me drift,
To the world beyond.
I surrender to the waves,
The sea and I are one.

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