Unnoticed

Location

Surrounded

need space

To breath

Suffocating

looking

for help

and no one,

no one

notices

Do I matter?

Guess not

Why not?

Falls

Tars fall

 Everyone turns

Turns away

Why

Why show pain?

Aren't worth it

They aren't worth it

Turn

Turning away

From life

Yes lifeits self.

Slowly,

Slowly I drift, Drifting away

Away,

Away from the crowd

Unnoticed.

 

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